When you
look at poems that Rudyard Kipling wrote, you realise poetry is continually
evolving and reflects the social beliefs of it’s time. Kipling definitely captured the Queen
Victoria age of Empire, solid Christianity and the English ‘gentleman’ made up
of courage, dignity and sacrifice. But
now his work is such a thing of the past.
Who would try to write in his style and content (who could write like
him, not having experienced the Victorian age)?
I must admit I’ve used Kipling as an influence for some of my
attempts. One Kipling poem from which I
borrow the first line and rhythm is, The
Ballad of the Clampherdown. This is
a great naval poem that you can recite.
It tells of a passing era and tradition – sailors learning to fight with
cutlasses and putting ships alongside to board in hand to hand combat. I believe the Clampherdown was the last
British ship in which the crew boarded with cutlasses. It’s a long poem but here it is complete:
The Ballad of the ‘Clampherdown’
(Rudyard Kipling 1865 - 1936)
It was our war-ship
‘Clampherdown’
Would sweep the
Channel clean,
Wherefore she kept
her hatches close
When the merry
Channel chops arose,
To save the bleached marine.
She had one bow-gun
of a hundred ton,
And a great stern-gun beside ;
They
dipped their noses deep in the sea,
They
racked their stays and stanchions free
In the wash of the wind-whipped tide.
It
was our war-ship ‘Clampherdown’
Fell in with a cruiser light
That
carried the dainty Hotchkiss gun
And
a pair o’ heels wherewith to run
From the grip of a close-fought fight.
She opened fire at
seven miles -
As ye shoot at a
bobbing cork -
And once she fired
and twice she fired,
Till the bow-gun
drooped like a lily tired
That lolls upon the stalk.
‘Captain,
the bow-gun melts apace,
‘the deck-beams break below,
‘Twere
well to rest for an hour or twain,
And
botch the shattered plates again.’
And he answered, ‘Make it so.’
She
opened fire within the mile –
As ye shoot at the flying duck –
And
the great stern-gun shot fair and true,
With
the heave of the ship, to the stainless
Blue,
And
the great stern-turret stuck.
‘Captain,
the turret fills with steam,
‘The feed –pipes burst below –
‘You
can hear the hiss of the helpless ram,
‘You
can hear the twisted runners jam.’
And he answered, ‘Turn and go!’
It was our war-ship
‘Clampherdown’,
And grimly did she roll;
Swung round to take
the cruiser’s fire
As the White Whale
faces the Thresher’s ire
When they war by the frozen pole.
‘Captain, the shells
are falling fast,
‘And faster still fall we;
‘And it is not meet
for English stock
To bide in the heart
of an eight-day clock
The death they cannot see’.
‘Lie down, lie down,
my bold A.B.,
‘We drift upon her beam;
‘We dare not ram, for
she can run;
‘And dare ye fire
another gun,
‘And die in the peeling steam?’
It was our war-ship
‘Clampherdown’
That carried an armour-belt;
But fifty feet at
stern and bow
Lay bare as the
paunch of the purser’s sow,
To the hail of the Nordenfeldt.
‘Captain, they hack
us through and through;
‘The chilled steel bolts are swift!
‘We have emptied the
bunkers in open sea,
‘Their shrapnel
bursts where our coal should be,’
And he answered, ‘Let her drift.’
It was our war-ship
‘Clampherdown,’
Swung round upon the tide,
Her two dumb guns
glared south and north,
And the blood and the
bubbling steam ran forth,
And she ground the cruiser’s side.
‘Captain, they cry,
the fight is done,
‘They bid you send your sword.’
And he answered,
‘Grapple her stern and bow,
‘They have asked for
the steel. They shall have it
Now;
‘Out cutlasses and
board!’
It was our war-ship
‘Clampherdown,’
Spewed up four hundred men;
And the scalded
stokers yelped delight,
As they rolled in the
waist and heard the fight
Stamp o’er their steel-walled pen.
They cleared the
cruiser end to end,
From conning-tower to hold.
They fought as they
fought in Nelson’s fleet;
They were stripped to
the waist, they were bare
to the feet,
As it was in the days
of old.
It was the sinking
‘Clampherdown’
Heaved up her battered side –
And carried a million
pounds in steel,
To the cod and the
corpse-fed conger-eel,
And the scour of the Channel tide.
It was the crew of
the ‘Clampherdown’
Stood out to sweep the sea,
On a cruiser won from
an ancient foe
As it was in the days
of long ago,
And as it still shall be.
I’m
thankful to Kipling for showing me the way to a rather lengthy naval ballad I
wrote, Fate of the Konigsberg. This is another experience where finding the
first line was a breakthrough for me – the rest flowed and I could complete the
poem in a matter of days. I was
fascinated by this story when I did some research on the ships my wife’s
grandfather (Fred) served in during his time in the Royal Navy (he served in
both World Wars). I’ve got a copy of his
service record and a few old photographs of matelots out in Africa ,
socialising with white ladies and eating watermelon from the back of a flat-bed
truck – then war broke out. Fred was on
HMS Astraea – that led me to the story of the German cruiser SMS Konigsberg and
how she was blockaded and scuttled herself up the Rufiji River . We hear a lot about the German pocket
battleship Graf Spee and the battle of the River Plate (1939), but little do we
know that a similar event occurred twenty odd years earlier in WW1. Thankyou Rudyard Kipling:
2007.
Linda’s grandfather, Fred Johnson served on HMS Astraea which was an
aging cruiser on the East Africa station at
the start of WW1. SMS Konigsberg was a
more modern cruiser based at Dar es Salaam
capital of German East Africa . Konigsberg ’s
fate was due mainly to lack of good maintenance facilities available to the
Germans. It is an historic event that
shows the role maintenance can play in tipping the balance of win or lose;
succeed or fail.
Fate of the Konigsberg
It was
the German cruiser Konigsberg put on a turn of
speed,
When
she saw the City of Winchester
steaming into the First World War,
Gave
chase for the coal which she soon retrieved,
Ere The
City was sent to the Gulf of Aden floor.
But the
coal burns quick in the Konigsberg and soon she
must take more,
From
the crew of the collier Somali somewhere on the open sea,
Where
Astraea waits and the Pegasus hunts to even up a score,
Between
a willing foe and aging ships of the British Admiralty.
Not
only coal but a home free port was the German cruisers need,
But
panic reigns in Dar es Salaam
where Astraea’s shells now fall,
And
decisions made give the ship no heed,
Sink a
barge to block the port entry becomes the harbour master’s call.
Loss of
home is a bitter blow for the Konigsberg to
share,
As
Captain Looff along with his crew search the African coast for shelter,
Which
they find in the form of a jungle lair,
Five
miles up where the waters shelve in the Rufiji River
delta.
The Konigsberg hides but her killer urge in days must be
relieved,
So she
slips one night from her fetid lair to run with the moon and stars,
And is
drawn by bow to an ambush scene the killer can’t believe,
Pegasus
tied to her berthing lines in the Port
of Zanzibar .
It was
the German cruiser Konigsberg stood off ten
thousand yards,
Brought
the barrels of her four inch guns on the British ship to bear,
And
Pegasus sitting calmly still completely caught off guard,
Is
never a match for a killer rogue hunting from a jungle lair.
With
duty done bold Captain Looff plans escape for his ship and crew,
So the
course he sets is around the Cape and on to Germany ,
Then death rattled up from the
engine room and the Konigsberg captain knew,
The
plan is doomed we are condemned escape will now not be.
Away to
the north race three fine ships best of the British kind,
The Weymouth , Chatham and Dartmouth too led by
Drury-Lowe,
With
orders fresh to shape due south the Konigsberg
to find,
And
when she is found to act with haste and crush the dreaded foe.
It is
cunning keeps the Konigsberg out of her
searcher’s reach,
Safe in
the delta draped in vines acting out repairs,
Until
Lowe brings Cutler in his flying boat hired from a Durbin beach,
To fly
the Rufiji River mouth, find the German from the
air.
Though
Cutler is a daring man and the Curtiss a top machine,
Neither
was ready for the deadly reach of the guns of the German raider,
Or the Konigsberg crew who took fine aim from off the starboard
beam,
Shot
out of the sky, the plane is destroyed and the pilot taken prisoner.
Days
become months for the Konigsberg as sailors
count them by,
Trapped
in a land where biting flies and fever death abounds,
Each
man waits in the stifling heat the moment he must die,
For
their ship in the river so far up is almost run aground.
A fate
is planned for the Konigsberg across the world in Malta ,
Where
sits the river gunboat Mersey and her sister ship Severn ,
Two
shallow drafted monitors made fit for work in the Delta,
Now
taken in tow and on their way with a wish for safe return.
July at
the end of a long snail tow and the Konigsberg
lookouts sight,
Two
black shapes that appear to be off the point Gengeni Island ,
The
news sweeps through the German crew and their captain makes to fight,
Remember
men the Fatherland, of us, our ship, and all that we have planned.
When
morning comes the ships engage their cordite burning hot,
Guns
crews toil in darkened holds with fear and mighty strength,
Ere the
Konigsberg in due course takes a fatal ranging
shot,
And
then the monitors make their gunfire walk along the cruisers length.
It was
the German cruiser Konigsberg settled on the
river bed,
When
she sunk herself with a scuttling charge preference to surrender,
Abandoned
yet still battle proud for the merry chase she’d led,
Whereupon
the British raised their caps on high,
cheered
death of the German raider.
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